The Commencement
The story centers around four teenagers, Madison, Becky, Desmond, and Lance, whose lives take a sinister turn after an innocent-seeming ceremony unleashes a series of events that will challenge their understanding of the supernatural. At the heart of the story is Dorothy, a novice in the supernatural arts, who unwittingly opens the door to spirits, leading to dire consequences for the teenagers involved.
As the tale unfolds, Becky becomes inhabited by a terrifying spirit with a distorted face, while Desmond's father meets a tragic end at the hands of a shadow spirit with red eyes. Desperate for a solution, the group turns to Dorothy's mother, Madam Rose, for a séance to rid Becky of the spirit. However, the séance goes awry, leaving Becky's fate uncertain, and revealing a long-buried secret about the death of Ruth Green, a teenage girl who had died two decades earlier.
Madison, driven by a personal connection, uncovers the truth behind Ruth Green's death, leading to shocking revelations that connect the town's dark history to a vengeful spirit, Justin Green. This malevolent force takes over Madison's body, leaving a trail of terror and revenge. Madam Rose, in a race against time, devises a daring plan to expel Justin Green and put an end to his reign of darkness, but unforeseen challenges arise, putting Madison's life at stake and revealing the deep-seated secrets of the town's prominent figures.
"The Commencement" explores themes of the supernatural, redemption, and the consequences of hidden sins. It offers a rollercoaster of suspense and a strong ensemble cast of characters who must confront their fears and confront the malevolent forces threatening their very existence. The story's climax is a tense battle between good and evil, with the spirit of Ruth Green playing a pivotal role in the resolution.
"The Commencement" has the potential to be a compelling and thrilling cinematic experience. It is a story that will keep audiences on the edge of their seats, exploring the supernatural with a fresh perspective while delving into the darkness that lies beneath the surface of a seemingly ordinary town. I believe this screenplay has the elements necessary to become a standout film that resonates with audiences worldwide.
"The Commencement"s contest placements include (Semifinalist, Reno Tahoe Screenplay Contest 2023, Quarterfinalist, Emerging Screenwriters - Genre Screenplay Competition 2022, 2021 Capital Fund Screenplay Competition Hot 100 Winner).